Documentation startpage

[Jorge Vallecillo]

Hi, am wondering any help in spanish, I just don't have enought time to translate. 

From: mailinglists at vinnl.nl
Date: Sun, 27 Sep 2009 22:45:10 +0200
Subject: Re: Documentation startpage
To: xubuntu-devel at lists.ubuntu.com



On Sun, Sep 27, 2009 at 6:43 PM, Pasi Lallinaho <open at knome.fi> wrote:


Hello everybody,



I've been working on the Xubuntu documenation startpage with Steve and

Jim lately, check where we are now at

http://emonk.fi/open/xubuntu/9.10/Documentation/Startpage/xubuntu-index.html.

If you have any ideas or suggestions on how to improve the page, its

layout or content, please let us know.



Let's make Karmic even better than Jaunty and finally improve the

documentation to the level it deserves to be. Looks very good, a few remarks;

 * The header is a bit odd, in that you read it from right to left. The logo is at the right, though it should be something you look at when you first see it and then glide over to the rest of the page. Therefore I'd put the "What is Xubuntu?" (which should be a quick introduction but requires a lot of knowledge in advance to understand, btw) on the right, and the "Welcome to..." to the left of, or at least left-aligned with, the logo.


 * Light blue on an even-lighter-blue background as found in the footer isn't really readable ;-)
Nice work though!
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