request for review of Ubuntu 10.04 LTS release announcement

[Mewshi Mewshi]

"Ubuntu is a full-featured Linux distribution for desktops, laptops, netbooks
and servers" should have a comma after "netbooks".

That's about it from my end.

On Wed, Apr 28, 2010 at 6:38 AM, Steve Langasek
<steve.langasek at canonical.com> wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> The draft for the Ubuntu 10.04 LTS release announcement is available here:
>
>  https://wiki.ubuntu.com/LucidLynx/ReleaseAnnouncement
>
> Please review and advise me of any corrections that should be made.
>
> (Note that the "upgrading" link currently points to a page which is not yet
> updated for 10.04; this should be done later today.)
>
> Thanks,
> --
> Steve Langasek                   Give me a lever long enough and a Free OS
> Debian Developer                   to set it on, and I can move the world.
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> slangasek at ubuntu.com                                     vorlon at debian.org
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