request for review of Ubuntu 10.04 LTS release announcement

[David Quist]

Actually no.  The sentence as written is gramaticaly correct.

Mewshi Mewshi wrote:
> "Ubuntu is a full-featured Linux distribution for desktops, laptops, netbooks
> and servers" should have a comma after "netbooks".
>
> That's about it from my end.
>
> On Wed, Apr 28, 2010 at 6:38 AM, Steve Langasek
> <steve.langasek at canonical.com> wrote:
>   
>> Hi all,
>>
>> The draft for the Ubuntu 10.04 LTS release announcement is available here:
>>
>>  https://wiki.ubuntu.com/LucidLynx/ReleaseAnnouncement
>>
>> Please review and advise me of any corrections that should be made.
>>
>> (Note that the "upgrading" link currently points to a page which is not yet
>> updated for 10.04; this should be done later today.)
>>
>> Thanks,
>> --
>> Steve Langasek                   Give me a lever long enough and a Free OS
>> Debian Developer                   to set it on, and I can move the world.
>> Ubuntu Developer                                    http://www.debian.org/
>> slangasek at ubuntu.com                                     vorlon at debian.org
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