Security Section - Modifications

[Gilbert Mendoza]

Phil, Adam...

As suggested in the previous thread [1], I've made the recommended
adjustments to the commit, along with working out some other minor grammar
issues.  There were some great tips in there that helped clarify a few
points on syntax.

Attached is a diff for review.  Thanks again.

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Gilbert Mendoza
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[1] https://lists.ubuntu.com/archives/ubuntu-doc/2008-January/010194.html
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