Tech Review Findings
Nick E.
ellery.nick at gmail.com
Wed Apr 9 03:29:37 UTC 2008
Hey there,
I recently joined the mentoring program as a tech reviewer. I've gone
through *compiz-intro*,* compiz-configure*,* *and *compiz-problems. *Remember,
I'm still a beginner at this, so I need some advice about things I may have
missed. Also, the Technical Reviewing Documentation page says that I can
fix the problems myself. How do I do this?
*Compiz-intro
*- [desktop more fun and easier to use.] I think it should be reworded
'desktop fun and easy to use'.
- [Visual effects are enabled by default] As far as I know, visual effects
are not enabled by default. Correct me if I'm wrong, but the default is no
visual effects.
- [users of computers with certain] Somehow, I don't think the statement
'users of computers' makes sense. The sentence should be reworded.
- [or cause the computer] Should be reworded 'or they may cause the
computer'.
*Compiz-configure
*- The directions at the beginning to open up *Appearance* should be *
italized.
- *It is often quicker to open up *Visual Effects *through right-clicking
the desktop background. Perhaps this should be mentioned.
*Compiz-problems
*- Again, the navigating should be *italized*.
This is all I found in these sections. I also would like to know if I
should post a bug report. Anyways, comment on my work and give me some
advice for next time.
Nick
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