Request for proofreading of release announcement mail

[Steve Langasek]

On Wed, Oct 17, 2007 at 10:38:20AM +0100, Andrew Barber wrote:
> On 17/10/2007, Steve Langasek <steve.langasek at canonical.com> wrote:

> > A draft for the Ubuntu 7.10 email announcement is now available at
> > <https://wiki.ubuntu.com/GutsyGibbon/ReleaseAnnouncement>.  Please review
> > and advise me (in cc:, please) of any problems.

> > Following the pattern of past release announcements, this draft is light on
> > technical detail, referring to pending press releases, the release notes,
> > and the upgrade guide for most of the meat.  Kubuntu and Edubuntu are linked
> > to from this mail; Xubuntu and Gobuntu are expected to announce separately.

> and an incredible variety of add-on software available with a few clicks.
> Should maybe read,
> and an incredible variety of add-on software available with just a few
> clicks.
> As I think that sounds simpler. Just adds a tone that it *is* very few, and
> it is quick and easy.

Agreed and accepted, thanks.