Request for proofreading of release announcement mail

[Andrew Barber]

On 17/10/2007, Steve Langasek <steve.langasek at canonical.com> wrote:
> Hi again,
>
> A draft for the Ubuntu 7.10 email announcement is now available at
> <https://wiki.ubuntu.com/GutsyGibbon/ReleaseAnnouncement>.  Please review
> and advise me (in cc:, please) of any problems.
>
> Following the pattern of past release announcements, this draft is light
on
> technical detail, referring to pending press releases, the release notes,
> and the upgrade guide for most of the meat.  Kubuntu and Edubuntu are
linked
> to from this mail; Xubuntu and Gobuntu are expected to announce
separately.
>
> Comments?
>
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and an incredible variety of add-on software available with a few clicks.
Should maybe read,
and an incredible variety of add-on software available with just a few
clicks.
As I think that sounds simpler. Just adds a tone that it *is* very few, and
it is quick and easy.


That is all I can really see...


-- 
Andrew Alexander Barber
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