[Request] Review User Guide 'Welcome'

[Sean Wheller]

On Friday 21 January 2005 02:18, Nick Loeve wrote:
> Did a quick review here at work (i'll have another detailed spellcheck
> etc later).
> Here is a patch for a few things i found.
>
> Well done. Nice Intro to Ubuntu.
>
> One thing i thought of, is that there is quite a few almost 'geek' terms
> like dependancies , X ect, which most people will not understand. I
> suppose you have to get detailed at some point :)

OK the patch looks good. Just apply it.

Thanks :-)
-- 
Sean Wheller
Technical Author
sean at inwords.co.za
http://www.inwords.co.za
Registered Linux User #375355
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