[Request] Review User Guide 'Welcome'

[Nick Loeve]

Sean Wheller wrote:

>On Friday 21 January 2005 02:18, Nick Loeve wrote:
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>>Did a quick review here at work (i'll have another detailed spellcheck
>>etc later).
>>Here is a patch for a few things i found.
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>>Well done. Nice Intro to Ubuntu.
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>>One thing i thought of, is that there is quite a few almost 'geek' terms
>>like dependancies , X ect, which most people will not understand. I
>>suppose you have to get detailed at some point :)
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>OK the patch looks good. Just apply it.
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>Thanks :-)
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Done :)