Xubuntu Strategy Document review

[Bruno Benitez]

I agree with Eero, i don't like the term "elegance" if I could I would
suggest change this line:

*Xubuntu is a community developed, Ubuntu-based operating system that
combines elegance and ease of use
*
with something like this:

*Xubuntu is a community developed, Ubuntu-based operating system that
combines simplicity and usability.
*

thats all i have for now.

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Bruno.-
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