Documentation Rewrite Update

Jack Fromm jjfrv8 at
Wed Aug 22 01:53:04 UTC 2012

Okay, I looked over your rewrite to get a feel for what you wanted.  It 
seems like you want to make this new version much more concise than the 
old one by eliminating a lot of the step-by-step details on how to 
accomplish things.  Is that accurate?

I've been working on a few more of the subpages under section 10.  
Mostly I've just tried to make the formatting consistent with the other 
sections but I've also been checking to make sure the references to 
fields, choices and buttons match the Quantal wording wherever that has 
changed.  So it still might be too wordy if you really are trying to 
tighten things up.  Let me know if that's the case.

Thanks for you patience.

On 08/21/2012 05:56 PM, Pasi Lallinaho wrote:
> I see you copied the old text over - great! I've rewritten one of the 
> subpages as an additional example for you (and others) on how to get 
> started with the actual rewrite.
> Again, please don't hesitate to be in touch.
> Cheers,
> Pasi

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