Documentation Rewrite Update

Pasi Lallinaho pasi at
Wed Aug 22 09:30:36 UTC 2012

Hey Jack!

Yes, if making it a bit more concise doesn't make it harder to follow, 
I'm encouraging you to do that.


On 22/08/12 04:53, Jack Fromm wrote:
> Okay, I looked over your rewrite to get a feel for what you wanted.  
> It seems like you want to make this new version much more concise than 
> the old one by eliminating a lot of the step-by-step details on how to 
> accomplish things.  Is that accurate?
> I've been working on a few more of the subpages under section 10. 
> Mostly I've just tried to make the formatting consistent with the 
> other sections but I've also been checking to make sure the references 
> to fields, choices and buttons match the Quantal wording wherever that 
> has changed.  So it still might be too wordy if you really are trying 
> to tighten things up.  Let me know if that's the case.
> Thanks for you patience.
> Jack
> On 08/21/2012 05:56 PM, Pasi Lallinaho wrote:
>> I see you copied the old text over - great! I've rewritten one of the 
>> subpages as an additional example for you (and others) on how to get 
>> started with the actual rewrite.
>> Again, please don't hesitate to be in touch.
>> Cheers,
>> Pasi

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