[Ubuntu-SG] Team Ubuntu Singapore - Booth Poster

[John Thng]

Hi,

The english used in the Pidgin is a bit weird.
Pidgin lets you or
Pidgin let's you ...
I do not know it's intentionally error, if so, ignore my comment.
Pidgin lets you chat on (I think the priority for Singaporeans is MSN,
should it comes first? or we are trying to demote MSN hehe)

Web Surfing with Mozilla Firefox will be faster, easier, safer. (original)
Web Surfing with Mozilla Firefox will be easier, faster, safer. (Might sound
more smooth and nicer??? Depends)

As from wikipedia, it's better to use OpenOffice.org instead of OpenOffice
in the poster.
"The project and software are informally referred to as *OpenOffice*, but
this term is a trademark <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trademark> held by
another party, requiring the project to adopt *OpenOffice.org* as its formal
name."

Various media player (original)
Various media players (amendment, should have "s" ya?)

User Friendly and packed with useful features. (original)
It's user friendly and packed with useful features (Not sure whether it
sounds nicer, but is more proper, depends)

Just some comments :)

Regards
John

On Fri, Aug 29, 2008 at 11:04 AM, Muhammad Heidir Abd M <
dave33bravo at yahoo.com.sg> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> Project: Booth Poster
> Owner: Muhammad Heidir
>
> I have uploaded our booth poster into our web @ http://ubuntu.sg.
>
> Any feedback regarding the booth poster, reflect back to me. Due to time
> constraint, I will not be able to change ownership of the design in case
> someone wants to take over.
>
> All changes will have to be finalised by 8th September 2008 to commence
> print.
>
> Regards,
> Heidir
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