Update: natty/gnome-help/C/display-2monitors.page

[Steve]

Hey everyone,
I did the display-2monitors.page, need someone to review it, here is the
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=== modified file 'gnome-help/C/display-2monitors.page'
--- gnome-help/C/display-2monitors.page 2011-04-26 07:06:41 +0000
+++ gnome-help/C/display-2monitors.page 2011-04-27 06:14:40 +0000
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       type="topic" style="task"
       id="display-2monitors">
   <info>
-    <revision version="11.04" date="2011-04-04" status="writing"/>
+    <revision version="11.04" date="2011-04-04" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>

     <credit type="author">
@@ -10,31 +10,26 @@
       <email>Steven.richardspc at gmail.com</email>
     </credit>

-    <desc>How to enable a second display in Ubuntu to extend your desktop
across two displays</desc>
+    <desc>How to enable a second display which allows you to extend your
desktop across two displays</desc>

   </info>


-<title>Enabling a second monitor in Ubuntu</title>
+<title>Enabling a second monitor</title>

- <p>Having a second monitor in your Ubuntu installation can be great for
multitasking
+ <p>Having a second monitor in your installation can be great for
multitasking
      and setting it up is quite easy to do by following these simple
steps.</p>

  <p>Only certain computers are capable of supporting two displays, make
sure you have proper outputs for your video

- card to connect your monitor to. Also, if your video card is not supported
by Ubuntu then this feature may not be fully functional.</p>
+ card to connect your monitor to.</p>

   <steps>
-    <item><p>To get started, ensure you have your second monitor attached
to your video card, then navigate to <gui>System</gui> -->
+    <item><p>To get started, ensure you have your second monitor attached
to your video card, then navigate to <gui>Applications (in the
sidebar)</gui> -->

-<gui>Preferences</gui> --> <gui>Monitors</gui>. In the box to the left you
should see two monitors, one will be disabled if not already
-
- enabled </p></item>
-    <item><p>Click the rectangle that says your monitors name, such as "XYZ
Brand 23"" Then select the appropriate resolution
-
- that your monitor supports, refresh rate, rotation (if necessary). Refer
to your monitors manual for configuring the
-
- appropriate settings.</p></item>
+Then search for <gui>Monitors</gui> in the search bar, select the Monitors
application.
+ </p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the rectangle that says your monitors name, such as "XYZ
Brand 23". First you will want to change the <gui>radio button at the
top</gui> from <gui>Off</gui> to <gui>On</gui>; then select the appropriate
resolution that your monitor supports, refresh rate, rotation (if
necessary). Refer to your monitors manual for configuring the appropriate
settings.</p></item>
     <item><p>To test out the new configuration hit the <gui>Apply</gui> key
and if it looks right then hit <gui>Close</gui>. If the monitor

  is not in the right location virtually in contrast to its actual physical
location then you can drag the monitors'
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Best Regards,
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Steven Richards

steven.richardspc at gmail.com

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