request for review of Ubuntu 10.04 beta1 release announcement

[Steve Langasek]

Hi all,

Here is a draft for the Ubuntu 10.04 beta1 email announcement:

  https://wiki.ubuntu.com/LucidLynx/Beta1Announcement

Please review and advise me of any problems.

The text on new features for desktop/server/netbook is also a little thin -
I realize this cycle is focused on stabilization, but maybe we should also
include "the best of the best new features since 8.04" here?  Suggestions
for additions are welcome.

I'm surprised that https://wiki.ubuntu.com/LucidLynx/TechnicalOverview has
no mention of the Ubuntu Software Center, which I believe has been a major
area of development this cycle?

Thanks,
-- 
Steve Langasek                   Give me a lever long enough and a Free OS
Debian Developer                   to set it on, and I can move the world.
Ubuntu Developer                                    http://www.debian.org/
slangasek at ubuntu.com                                     vorlon at debian.org
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