request for review of Ubuntu 10.04 LTS release announcement

[David Quist]

The first sentence should probably end "....Cloud and Amazon's EC2."

The last sentence should delete the comma after UbuntuStudio.

Otherwise the clip looks fine.

mw crowley wrote:
>  The Ubuntu team is pleased to announce Ubuntu 10.04 LTS (Long-Term
>  Support) for Desktop, Server, Ubuntu Enterprise Cloud, Amazon's EC2.
>  Also released is Ubuntu 10.04 Netbook Edition.
>  Codenamed "Lucid Lynx", 10.04 LTS and 10.04 Netbook Edition continue
>  Ubuntu's tradition of integrating the latest open source technologies
>  into a high-quality, user-friendly Linux distribution.
>
>  Read more about the features of Ubuntu 10.04 LTS in the following press
>  releases:
>
>   Desktop edition    http://www.ubuntu.com/news/ubuntu-10.04-desktop-edition
>   Server edition     http://www.ubuntu.com/news/ubuntu-10.04-server-edition
>
>
>  The LTS designation means that 10.04 LTS will be supported for three
>  years on desktops and five years on servers.  Ubuntu 10.04 Netbook
>  Edition will be supported for 18
>  months.
>
>  Ubuntu 10.04 LTS also provides the basis for new 10.04 releases of Kubuntu,
>  Xubuntu, Edubuntu, UbuntuStudio, and Mythbuntu:
>
>  On Thu, Apr 29, 2010 at 12:21 PM, Mewshi Mewshi <mewshi at gmail.com> wrote:
>  "Ubuntu is a full-featured Linux distribution for desktops, laptops, netbooks
> and servers" should have a comma after "netbooks".
>   
>>> That's about it from my end.
>>>
>>> On Wed, Apr 28, 2010 at 6:38 AM, Steve Langasek
>>> <steve.langasek at canonical.com> wrote:
>>>       
>>>> Hi all,
>>>>
>>>> The draft for the Ubuntu 10.04 LTS release announcement is available here:
>>>>
>>>>  https://wiki.ubuntu.com/LucidLynx/ReleaseAnnouncement
>>>>
>>>> Please review and advise me of any corrections that should be made.
>>>>
>>>> (Note that the "upgrading" link currently points to a page which is not yet
>>>> updated for 10.04; this should be done later today.)
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> --
>>>> Steve Langasek                   Give me a lever long enough and a Free OS
>>>> Debian Developer                   to set it on, and I can move the world.
>>>> Ubuntu Developer                                    http://www.debian.org/
>>>> slangasek at ubuntu.com                                     vorlon at debian.org
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>>
>> --
>> crowleymw at gmail.com
>>
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