request for review of Ubuntu 9.10 release candidate announcement

[Jim Campbell]

Hi Steve,

On Wed, Oct 21, 2009 at 5:44 AM, Steve Langasek
<steve.langasek at canonical.com> wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Here is the draft for the Ubuntu 9.10 release candidate announcement:
>
>  https://wiki.ubuntu.com/KarmicKoala/RCAnnouncement
>
> Please review and advise me of any corrections that should be made.
>
> Thanks,
> --
> Steve Langasek                   Give me a lever long enough and a Free OS
> Debian Developer                   to set it on, and I can move the world.
> Ubuntu Developer                                    http://www.debian.org/
> slangasek at ubuntu.com                                     vorlon at debian.org
>

While I understand that the boot experience changes may have landed in
the beta release, should this statement, "New boot experience:
multiple changes to look, feel and speed of the boot experience have
been included in the Ubuntu 9.10 beta" read as such?

Also, the placement of, "A more complete tour of the features new in
9.10 can be found at
http://www.ubuntu.com/getubuntu/releasenotes/910overview," seems a bit
odd within the Mythbuntu section.  That link currently comes up with a
"page not found," error, but it seems like it would be better placed
within the Ubuntu desktop section near the top of the page, or under
the "More Information" section at the bottom of the page.

Also, what is the deadline for the setup of the derivative release
announcement pages?

Thanks!

Jim