request for review of Ubuntu 9.04 beta release announcement

Steve Langasek steve.langasek at
Thu Mar 26 19:23:09 UTC 2009

On Thu, Mar 26, 2009 at 07:46:00AM +0000, Dougie Richardson wrote:

> Nice and clear Steve, my only suggestions is to add the word
> "editions" to the end of the first sentence - at the moment it might
> read to some as though there is one image;

> "The Ubuntu team is pleased to announce the beta release of Ubuntu 9.04
> Desktop and Server editions."

Thanks, added.

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