request for review of Ubuntu 9.04 beta release announcement
steve.langasek at canonical.com
Thu Mar 26 19:23:09 UTC 2009
On Thu, Mar 26, 2009 at 07:46:00AM +0000, Dougie Richardson wrote:
> Nice and clear Steve, my only suggestions is to add the word
> "editions" to the end of the first sentence - at the moment it might
> read to some as though there is one image;
> "The Ubuntu team is pleased to announce the beta release of Ubuntu 9.04
> Desktop and Server editions."
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