Overhaul of musicvideophotos
Matthew East
mdke at ubuntu.com
Fri Sep 12 07:03:59 UTC 2008
On Wed, Sep 10, 2008 at 12:11 AM, Phil Bull <philbull at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi guys,
>
> I'm attaching a patch which makes some pretty extensive changes to the
> musicvideophotos section of the system docs. The material in the "Music
> and audio" section is new, and has mostly been written to address what I
> found to be the most popular questions on this topic on the Ubuntu
> forums.
>
> Due to the size of the patch, I'd appreciate some feedback on it before
> I apply it to the development branch (the broken links will be cleaned
> up before it's applied).
It looks good to me. I think that in the audio section you have a
couple of troubleshooting subsections which look like they belong in
one of the other subsections because the content overlaps.
So:
1. "How can I prevent CDs from playing when I insert them?" and "Song
names/cover art are missing/wrong for some songs" should be within
"Listen to audio files and CDs"
2. "My portable audio player does not recognize songs copied from
Ubuntu" should be within "Use an iPod or other portable music player"
3. "My microphone does not work or is too quiet" should be within
"Recording sounds".
If you move those I think the section will be tidier and more intuitive.
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Matthew East
http://www.mdke.org
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