request for review of Ubuntu 8.10 release announcement

[Steve Langasek]

On Wed, Oct 29, 2008 at 05:01:21AM -0400, Daniel T Chen wrote:
> On 10/29/2008 04:36 AM, Steve Langasek wrote:

>> Hi all,

>> Here is a draft for the Ubuntu 8.10 email announcement:

>>    https://wiki.ubuntu.com/IntrepidIbex/ReleaseAnnouncement

>> Please review and advise me of any problems.

> Just a couple minor points:

> The "Helping Shape Ubuntu" section is missing a colon following
> "participate at".

> The "About Ubuntu" section places the support URL on the same
> line instead of on a separate one as all other URLs are
> formatted.

Thanks for pointing this out - yes, we seem to have a history of being not
entirely consistent with the URLs.  I've corrected this now.

Cheers,
-- 
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