request for review of Ubuntu 8.10 release announcement

[Daniel T Chen]

On 10/29/2008 04:36 AM, Steve Langasek wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> Here is a draft for the Ubuntu 8.10 email announcement:
>
>    https://wiki.ubuntu.com/IntrepidIbex/ReleaseAnnouncement
>
> Please review and advise me of any problems.
>
> Thanks,
Just a couple minor points:

The "Helping Shape Ubuntu" section is missing a colon following
"participate at".

The "About Ubuntu" section places the support URL on the same
line instead of on a separate one as all other URLs are
formatted.