installing packages without an internet connection patch

[Ben]

Okay, i've fixed the things you mentioned and also a few other thing a 
missed when i proofread it the first time the new .diff file is attached.

-Ben

Phil Bull wrote:
> Hi Ben,
>
> Excellent work! Your patch validated first time and is pretty much
> spot-on in terms of content. Could I suggest a couple of small changes,
> though?
>
>  1. Could you change the title of the section to something like
> 'Installing packages without an Internet connection'? It's more explicit
> than 'offline'.
>  2. Could you change "Ubuntu 7.04_Feisty Fawn" to "Ubuntu 7.10_Gutsy
> Gibbon", as we'll be releasing these docs for Gutsy only.
>  3. Could you split the lengthier sets of instructions up into steps?
> This makes them easier to follow. You can use the <procedure> and <step>
> tags to do this, e.g.:
>
> <para>To enable <application>Synaptic</application> to install packages
> from CDs which contain packages:</para>
> <procedure>
> 	<step>
> 		<para>Step one text goes here</para>
> 	</step>
> 	<step>
> 		<para>Step two text goes here etc.</para>
> 	</step>
> </procedure>
>
> Also, I noticed a few minor typos:
>
>  * "cornet" -> "corner"
>  * "insert you Ubuntu" -> "insert your Ubuntu"
>  * "CD and Open" -> "CD and open"
>  * "repositories from the settings menu" -> "Repositories from the
> Settings menu" (two instances of this typo)
>
> Thanks,
>
> Phil
>
>   

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