introducing myself and asking for opinions

Phil Bull philbull at gmail.com
Sat Jul 28 23:45:26 UTC 2007


Hi Philipp,

On Sat, 2007-07-28 at 20:19 +0200, Philipp Höhn wrote:
> Thanks for your answer.
> I edited the links according to your suggestion. I also had a look at
> the design changes you made. Looks pretty good and comprehensible to me.
> But I don't see a way of splitting this article into sections. I
> understand and agree that in general this is a good thing but in this
> case I don't see big enough differences in the particular parts of the
> text that would allow to split it into sections. I'd be pleased to be
> proven wrong.

I've tried to split the page into sections. I'm not sure how well I've
done that, but it is broken up a little bit. Let me know what you think!

Thanks,

Phil

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