introducing myself and asking for opinions

[Philipp Höhn]

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Phil Bull wrote:
> Hi Philipp,
> 
> On Sat, 2007-07-28 at 17:00 +0200, Philipp Höhn wrote:
> [...]
>> Hi,
>> my name is Philipp Höhn. I am supposed to add how-tos from the
>> FullCircle Magazine ( https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuMagazine ) to the
>> help.ubuntu.com wiki. Being new to this wiki (and this mailing list, of
>> course), I request a little indulgence because I am not quite sure how
>> to do things right yet.
>>
>> I copied this article (
>> https://help.ubuntu.com/community/Photos/LinuxAndPhotography ) from the
>> FulLCircle Magazine to the wiki. This is my first attempt of using this
>> wiki so I ask you to have a look at it and tell me if I should change
>> anything about it. I was told to try to integrate it a bit more into the
>> wiki which I tried to do by setting up several links to other articles.
>> If this isn't enough or if there are other things I could do, please let
>> me know. Although I'd like to ask where to add this article on its
>> parent page ( https://help.ubuntu.com/community/Photos ). I didn't "just
>> do it" to not do anything wrong and make your beautiful wiki look bad.
> 
> It looks pretty good for a first attempt! There are just a couple of
> suggestions I'd like to make:
> 
>  * Use wiki-links for links to pages on the help wiki. For example,
> where you have used '[https://help.ubuntu.com/community/K3b K3b]', use
> ["K3b"] instead.
>  * Split the page into sections. This makes it easier to read the
> article.
> 
> I've linked to the page from the parent page, under 'Tutorials'.
> 
> You can find lots of tips on how to use the wiki in the wiki guide [1].
> If you'd like any further help, just let us know.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Phil
> 
> [1] - https://help.ubuntu.com/community/WikiGuide
> 
Thanks for your answer.
I edited the links according to your suggestion. I also had a look at
the design changes you made. Looks pretty good and comprehensible to me.
But I don't see a way of splitting this article into sections. I
understand and agree that in general this is a good thing but in this
case I don't see big enough differences in the particular parts of the
text that would allow to split it into sections. I'd be pleased to be
proven wrong.

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Philipp Höhn

www.philipp-hoehn.de
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