xubuntu - office patch

[Jim Campbell]

Thanks again, George.

On 8/30/07, George Lesica <glesica at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Here's the new version, made the changes I think you were looking for.
> Found a couple little errors too.  Let me know if there's anything else you
> think should be changed.
>
> Thanks,
> George


I notice that this sentence, "+<para>There are a wide variety of office
applications available for Xubuntu that allow you to create word processor
documents, spreadsheets, presentations, graphics and images and design
publications and documents.</para>" seems a bit redundant.

Perhaps say, "+<para>There are a wide variety of office applications
available for Xubuntu that allow you to create documents, spreadsheets,
presentations, graphics, and even to design publications.</para>

Also, I would change:
<listitem><para>A spreadsheet
(<application>Gnumeric</application>);</para></listitem>

to

<listitem><para>A spreadsheet application
(<application>Gnumeric</application>);</para></listitem>


In the OpenOffice.org section you write, "This office quite is not . . . ",
but I think you meant to write, "This office suite is not . . . ".

Also, in the "<title>Sending documents to other people</title>" section, we
list what we'd need to do for OpenOffice.org applications, but don't list
what we'd need to do for Gnome Office applications.  I think we'll need to
change this.

I realize this is a lot of work, so I will help out here.

Thanks again for your efforts, George.  You are awesome.  :-)

Jim
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