xubuntu - office patch

[George Lesica]

Here ya go... :)  I'm gonna look over it a bit more also but just so people
can see what it looks like now if they want to make comments, here's
(another) patch for it.

-George

On 8/30/07, Jim Campbell <jwcampbell at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Thanks again, George.
>
> On 8/30/07, George Lesica <glesica at gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Here's the new version, made the changes I think you were looking for.
> > Found a couple little errors too.  Let me know if there's anything else you
> > think should be changed.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > George
>
>
> I notice that this sentence, "+<para>There are a wide variety of office
> applications available for Xubuntu that allow you to create word processor
> documents, spreadsheets, presentations, graphics and images and design
> publications and documents.</para>" seems a bit redundant.
>
> Perhaps say, "+<para>There are a wide variety of office applications
> available for Xubuntu that allow you to create documents, spreadsheets,
> presentations, graphics, and even to design publications.</para>
>
> Also, I would change:
> <listitem><para>A spreadsheet
> (<application>Gnumeric</application>);</para></listitem>
>
> to
>
> <listitem><para>A spreadsheet application
> (<application>Gnumeric</application>);</para></listitem>
>
>
> In the OpenOffice.org section you write, "This office quite is not . . .
> ", but I think you meant to write, "This office suite is not . . . ".
>
> Also, in the "<title>Sending documents to other people</title>" section,
> we list what we'd need to do for OpenOffice.org applications, but don't
> list what we'd need to do for Gnome Office applications.  I think we'll need
> to change this.
>
> I realize this is a lot of work, so I will help out here.
>
> Thanks again for your efforts, George.  You are awesome.  :-)
>
> Jim
>
>


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~ George T. Lesica
glesica at gmail.com
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