Minor spelling or English errors

William R. Castle wrcastle at comcast.net
Thu Mar 23 05:51:06 UTC 2006


Hi, In case you want to fix it, "recieve" at url: https://wiki.ubuntu.com/DocumentationTeam/Contact
should be "receive."

Also, this phrase at http://help.ubuntu.com/quicktour/C/quicktour.html isn't quite idiomatic English: 
"Sometimes you need to tweak, so enjoy a few new ways such as starting and stop services with a single click. Or seeing all your harddrives and controlling the boot order."

It might be better to say:

"When you need to tweak, enjoy a few new tricks such as starting and stopping services with a single click. Or seeing all your hard drives at once, or easily controlling the boot order."

Hope these are useful,

Regards, Bill Castle
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