[ubuntu-art] Breathe user-trash
Danny King
dannyking at gmail.com
Wed Oct 1 19:34:34 BST 2008
I really like the new grey colour and the paper is really good. Can I
ask how you made the paper?
A few things that I'm not sure about:
I think the white streaks are too vivid, perhaps try making them more
subtle and seeing how that looks? (maybe it'll be worse, just
speculating).
The left and right edges are slightly jagged, maybe either add a very
subtle blurred object behind them?
The top 'lip' of the bin doesn't have a shadow and I think it would
(although, also subtle)
I think the inside of the empty bin is very dark. If the light is
coming from above it would probably look very similar to the outside?
The paper looks a little too white to me.
The recycle icon might look better if it appeared to be etched in to
the plastic?
The black base at the very bottom of the bin doesn't look like it's
the same material as the rest of the bin - maybe it's too dark.
I realize this sounds like a very negative response so let me say that
I think your icons are wonderful as they are and I find them very
inspirational, I'm just trying to make them perfect. If anyone
disagrees with any of my suggestions I welcome debate!
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