review wanted for admin's guide to multisite and access control

[Martin Pool]

Hello,

Neil has written some more sections for the Administrator's guide.
I'm going to review them, but it would also be useful to get review
from Bazaar users, either for: things that you'd also want to know,
things that seem incorrect, things that are unclear.  Or praise is
always welcome too.

https://code.edge.launchpad.net/~nmb/bzr/admin-guide-multisite/+merge/15764
https://code.edge.launchpad.net/~nmb/bzr/admin-guide-security/+merge/15850

email replies here welcome too.

-- 
Martin <http://launchpad.net/~mbp/>