nit picking bzr-migration-docs

Algis Kabaila akabaila at pcug.org.au
Sat Oct 24 05:16:33 BST 2009


On Saturday 24 October 2009 13:52:34 Matthew D. Fuller wrote:
> On Sat, Oct 24, 2009 at 01:42:10PM +1100 I heard the voice of
> > (That's a natural consequence of using a best practice Bazaar directly
> > encourages called *feature branching*.)
>
> Perhaps shuffling it around to an object and elaboration, rather than
> a very long object, e.g. "That's a natural consequence of using
> *feature branching*, a best practice Bazaar directly encourages".
>
> I also prefer "This is" to "That's", but that may be an overall tonal
> issue rather than a local wording one.
> "That is a natural consequence of using *feature branching*, a best practice 
>Bazaar directly encourages".

Aha, Matthews version even I understand.   Let me repeat that I really could 
not fathom what the original sentence meant.  

If it is because of my advanced age, so be it (but before I admit that, I 
would first challenge you to a chess game on FICS - http://www.freechess.org/)

OldAl.




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