nit picking bzr-migration-docs

[Matthew D. Fuller]

On Sat, Oct 24, 2009 at 01:42:10PM +1100 I heard the voice of
Algis Kabaila, and lo! it spake thus:
> 
> You are quite correct - the change was only local :(  I still don't like the 
> sentence 
> (That's a natural consequence of using a best practice Bazaar directly 
> encourages called *feature branching*.) 
> 
> Perhaps that's because my native language is not English, but to me
> the above  sentence just does not make sense (quit likely my
> suggestion was not any better - I tried not to change too much and
> that is no way to edit). 

Perhaps shuffling it around to an object and elaboration, rather than
a very long object, e.g. "That's a natural consequence of using
*feature branching*, a best practice Bazaar directly encourages".

I also prefer "This is" to "That's", but that may be an overall tonal
issue rather than a local wording one.


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