Doc review & quick ref card - anyone with some DTP skills?

[Aaron Bentley]

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Sabin Iacob wrote:
> Ian Clatworthy wrote:
>> What a good start!
> hmm, confused it with push
> 
>> "auto-resolve conflicts" is probably better as "auto-detect resolved
>> conflicts".
>>   
> 
> indeed; also "specify conflict as resolved" is perhaps more accurate
> than "manually resolve conflict"

Nice work!

There are some line-spacing issues:
- - the example text seems to have too little whitespace between lines,
  especially on FF.
- - the example text should be closer to its heading than to the following
  heading.

You may wish to use the svg version of the logo:
http://bazaar-vcs.org/LogoOptions?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=Bazaar+Logo+2006-07-27.svg

I'm not sure whether the items (e.g. "New Project", "Working tree
status") need colons, but I don't feel strongly about that.

The png seems to print reasonably well, despite its RGB colorspace.  On
my printer, the blue is a bit greener, the yellow is redder, and the
logo arrow's gray is much more obviously gray.

I'm tempted to think something should go to the right of the title.
Perhaps "Your notes here"?

Aaron
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