bzr 0.7 release canidate 3

[James Blackwell]

On Mon, Jan 23, 2006 at 05:09:41AM +0100, Ivan Krstic wrote:
> James Blackwell wrote:
> > ---
> > Bzr is a simple decentralized revision control system. Decentralized
> > revision control systems give users to branch remote repositories to a
> > local context. Users can commit to local branches without requiring
> > special permission from the branches that they branched from.
> > ---
> 
> "give users to branch remote" doesn't parse; I think you're missing
> something like "the ability to" in the middle, or s/give/allow/.

Yup. I noticed and fixed this while submitting a new description.
  
> Also, "from the branches that they branched from" is awkward, perhaps
> "without requiring special permission from the owners of the branches
> from which they branched"?

I didn't catch this one though. :( I'll take care of it. =)

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