<html> <head> <meta content="text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1" http-equiv="Content-Type"> </head> <body bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000"> Hey Luca, On 06/19/2012 02:38 PM, Luca Manlio De Lisi wrote: <blockquote cite="mid:CACx+0b5W38ztK_=r=FuTVC7gJKfDPkVyHmg58rgUoF4iXxbVhQ@mail.gmail.com" type="cite">Hi Pasi! I've found into the target page and paragraph, at the end of second section, instead of "but due to the ease of use it is a good option for these users too" I think that could be better to write something like "according to this ease of use, it's a good alternative for those users".</blockquote> Others, feedback? <blockquote cite="mid:CACx+0b5W38ztK_=r=FuTVC7gJKfDPkVyHmg58rgUoF4iXxbVhQ@mail.gmail.com" type="cite">Always in that page, at focus introduction paragraph I've got the feeling that we've forgot some commas, I think it should be "he specifications in the strategy document should not be confused with release specific goals and priorities, but instead recognized as the principles which the release specific goals are based on".</blockquote> I think this is fine as it is. <blockquote cite="mid:CACx+0b5W38ztK_=r=FuTVC7gJKfDPkVyHmg58rgUoF4iXxbVhQ@mail.gmail.com" type="cite">In the Community page, at "Becoming and staying a member" paragraph, I think there's a verbal mistake (I've to admit that I've some doubts if I've understood the page): "To be accepted to this team, one must demonstrate their motivation and ability to contribute to Xubuntu", singular person with plural verb? I'm wrong or it better be "one must demonstrate his/hers motivation"? In the same paragraph, I believe that "However, if the break is to last longer than a cycle, or the contributor is unsure if they will contribute at all in the future, it is encouraged to leave the team and reapply at a later time" could sound better as "However, if the break lasts longer than a cycle, or the contributor is unsure if he/her will contribute anymore, etc etc". </blockquote> This is "by design", so won't fix. <blockquote cite="mid:CACx+0b5W38ztK_=r=FuTVC7gJKfDPkVyHmg58rgUoF4iXxbVhQ@mail.gmail.com" type="cite"> At the moment, that's where I can check due to other things I've to do! You'll receive a mail if I've some other purposes or maybe not! </blockquote> Thanks! Pasi <pre class="moz-signature" cols="72">-- Pasi Lallinaho (knome) » <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://open.knome.fi/">http://open.knome.fi/</a> Leader of Shimmer Project and Xubuntu » <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://shimmerproject.org/">http://shimmerproject.org/</a> Graphic artist, webdesigner, Ubuntu member » <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://xubuntu.org/">http://xubuntu.org/</a></pre> </body> </html>