Xubuntu Strategy Document review

Pasi Lallinaho pasi at shimmerproject.org
Tue Jun 19 18:44:46 UTC 2012


Hey Luca,

On 06/19/2012 02:38 PM, Luca Manlio De Lisi wrote:
> Hi Pasi!
>
> I've found into the target page and paragraph, at the end of second
> section, instead of "but due to the ease of use it is a good option
> for these users too" I think that could be better to write something
> like "according to this ease of use, it's a good alternative for those
> users".

Others, feedback?

> Always in that page, at focus introduction paragraph I've got the
> feeling that we've forgot some commas, I think it should be "he
> specifications in the strategy document should not be confused with
> release specific goals and priorities, but instead recognized as the
> principles which the release specific goals are based on".

I think this is fine as it is.

> In the Community page, at "Becoming and staying a member" paragraph, I
> think there's a verbal mistake (I've to admit that I've some doubts if
> I've understood the page): "To be accepted to this team, *one must
> demonstrate their* motivation and ability to contribute to Xubuntu",
> singular person with plural verb? I'm wrong or it better be "one must
> demonstrate his/hers motivation"? In the same paragraph, I believe
> that "However, if the break is to last longer than a cycle, or the
> contributor is unsure if they will contribute at all in the future, it
> is encouraged to leave the team and reapply at a later time" could
> sound better as "However, if the break lasts longer than a cycle, or
> the contributor is unsure if he/her will contribute anymore, etc etc".

This is "by design", so won't fix.

>
> At the moment, that's where I can check due to other things I've to
> do! You'll receive a mail if I've some other purposes or maybe not!

Thanks!
Pasi

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