New Xubuntu.org

[Jim Campbell]

Hi All,

On 10/22/07, Vincent <imnotb at gmail.com> wrote:
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> > Done! http://www.xubuntu.org/
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> > (Note to website team: I've backed the old one up here:
> > http://www.xubuntu.org/node/45)
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Sorry for not catching this sooner, but could we make a few adjustments to
the front page text?  My suggestions are listed below:



Text portion #1 currently says:

*...is easy to use*

*Xubuntu comes pre-loaded with a wide selection of software that range from
office applications to web browsing and will mostly be ready to use after
installation. Learn more... *

* *

Change to:



...is easy to use

Xubuntu comes pre-loaded with a wide selection of software, ranging from
office applications to web browsing software, so your computer is ready to
use immediately after installation.  Learn more...



(I understand that Xubuntu isn't as full-featured as Kubuntu or Ubuntu, but
the current wording makes it sound like the system won't really work after
you install Xubuntu.  :)  It's better than that!  :)  )





Text portion #2 currently says:



*...is fast*

*Xubuntu uses the Xfce desktop environment, meaning that it will run fast
while still delivering a user-friendly interface. Older computers get back
to life, while newer ones will run faster than ever before!*



Change to:



...is fast

Xubuntu uses the Xfce desktop environment, meaning that it will run fast
while still delivering a user-friendly interface. Older computers feel
lively again, while newer ones will run faster than ever before!



(Just a minor wording change.)



Thanks, all.



Jim
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