[Ubuntu-US-CA] Ubuntu Tri-Fold Source Files

[Mark Garrow]

I can't tell because I haven't really looked close enough, but on the front of 
the brochure is "Ubuntu" in the new Ubuntu font?  Should it be for 
consistency?

Also, under "Join the Community / Get Help: .... should we mention the IRC 
channels and the relevant server?  Granted many won't know what that is but 
others will. Perhaps with a corresponding link to the wiki on IRC.  There 
seems to be enough room to do it.

In the "Connecting to WiFi:" section on the first line there is a misspelling.. 
networks instead of networs.  

Section "Thumdrives / Mediaplayers in Ubuntu:"  Thumdrives should be spelled 
Thumbdrives.

In the "Do I need to defrag or .... " section..   "nearly no virus" has two 
issues.. bad english, and virus should be plural.  "Nearly no" implies there 
are viruses (viri?) but then we state that we don't need a scanner.. There 
should be a better way to state that.

Best,

Mark Garrow
(Scunizi)

On Sunday 28 March 2010 12:13:28 pm Jack Deslippe wrote:
> Hi Everyone,
> 
> I have put up the source files for our second brochure here:
> 
> http://civet.berkeley.edu/~jdeslip/Ubuntu/
> 
> Have a look and give me some comments.
> 
> -Jack
>