[Ubuntu-US-CA] Ubuntu Tri-Fold Source Files

Mark Garrow markgarrow at gmail.com
Sun Mar 28 20:10:51 UTC 2010

I can't tell because I haven't really looked close enough, but on the front of 
the brochure is "Ubuntu" in the new Ubuntu font?  Should it be for 

Also, under "Join the Community / Get Help: .... should we mention the IRC 
channels and the relevant server?  Granted many won't know what that is but 
others will. Perhaps with a corresponding link to the wiki on IRC.  There 
seems to be enough room to do it.

In the "Connecting to WiFi:" section on the first line there is a misspelling.. 
networks instead of networs.  

Section "Thumdrives / Mediaplayers in Ubuntu:"  Thumdrives should be spelled 

In the "Do I need to defrag or .... " section..   "nearly no virus" has two 
issues.. bad english, and virus should be plural.  "Nearly no" implies there 
are viruses (viri?) but then we state that we don't need a scanner.. There 
should be a better way to state that.


Mark Garrow

On Sunday 28 March 2010 12:13:28 pm Jack Deslippe wrote:
> Hi Everyone,
> I have put up the source files for our second brochure here:
> http://civet.berkeley.edu/~jdeslip/Ubuntu/
> Have a look and give me some comments.
> -Jack

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