[ubuntu-uk] [uk-marketing] Article for local mag

[Darren.Mansell at opengi.co.uk]

No not at all, I agree with you. I would like to see the part about
rarely crashing staying out though. I've never had it crash through
something that wasn't my own doing ;)


-----Original Message-----
From: ubuntu-uk-bounces at lists.ubuntu.com
[mailto:ubuntu-uk-bounces at lists.ubuntu.com] On Behalf Of Chris Rowson
Sent: 23 July 2007 15:21
To: British Ubuntu Talk
Subject: Re: [ubuntu-uk] [uk-marketing] Article for local mag

> Anyway there was an edit conflict so I saved it with the highlighted
> conflicts. You can have a look at delete whatever you don't like.
>


Whilst I do like the edits, I worry that they make the article seem a
little more caustic and technical. The audience I had in mind when
writing the article was older folk with little IT experience. Have I
been dumbing them down too much do you think?

Chris

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