[ubuntu-uk] [uk-marketing] Article for local mag

Chris Rowson christopherrowson at gmail.com
Mon Jul 23 15:21:10 BST 2007


> Anyway there was an edit conflict so I saved it with the highlighted
> conflicts. You can have a look at delete whatever you don't like.
>


Whilst I do like the edits, I worry that they make the article seem a
little more caustic and technical. The audience I had in mind when
writing the article was older folk with little IT experience. Have I
been dumbing them down too much do you think?

Chris



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