[Bug 1266432] Re: Description with two conjugated verbs for a single subject

[Pascal De Vuyst]

** Description changed:

+ Package: nova-objectstore
+ Version: 1:2014.1~b1-0ubuntu2
+ 
  Hello,
+ The package description contains a small typo:
+  This is the package contains a very simple S3-like object store.
+ Should be:
+  This package contains...   (very simple and direct)
+   or
+  This is the package which contains... (little much heavier)
  
  In the string
  https://translations.launchpad.net/ddtp-ubuntu/trusty/+pots/ddtp-ubuntu-main/fr/13117
  
- it seems to be grammatically incorrect.
- 
- Instead
- This is the package contains a very simple S3-like object store.
- 
- Maybe,
- This package contains...   (very simple and direct)
- or 
- This is the package which contains... (little much heavier)
- 
- will be better formulated.
- 
  Regards,
  Pascal

** Summary changed:

- Description with two conjugated verbs for a single subject
+ nova-objectstore: Typo in package description: "is the"

** Summary changed:

- nova-objectstore: Typo in package description: "is the"
+ nova-objectstore: Typo in package description: "is the package contains"

** Tags added: bitesize packaging string-fix

** Also affects: nova (Ubuntu)
   Importance: Undecided
       Status: New

** Changed in: nova (Ubuntu)
       Status: New => Confirmed

** Changed in: ddtp-ubuntu
       Status: Confirmed => Triaged

** Changed in: ddtp-ubuntu
   Importance: Undecided => Low

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Title:
  nova-objectstore: Typo in package description: "is the package
  contains"

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