Feels a little light but a good explanation of how, if not the what it does, and why it is that way.<br><br>Im assuming its an introductory course?<br><br>Language and formatting looks good. Nice use of text boxes to highlight code snipits.<br>
<br>I would add using a dummy organizations details to show how to modify it for specific situations to make things a little clearer. At the moment the theory seems well covered, but more examples needed.<br><br clear="all">
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<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Sep 10, 2009 at 7:28 AM, Martin Owens <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:doctormo@gmail.com">doctormo@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">
Hey all,<br>
<br>
For those not in the know about how this works, we have a seem of peer<br>
review we're trying to get the ball rolling on and this week's class<br>
that I've just very tentatively finished is about networking<br>
infrastructure such as DHCP and DNS and how to configure them.<br>
<br>
1) If you know the subject then I need to you review the technical<br>
accuracy of the subject.<br>
2) And if you don't, I need you to review the language, form and<br>
graphics.<br>
<br>
Each course should go through a certain amount of peer review and it's a<br>
job just as important as creation, editing, drawing and teaching.<br>
<br>
You can find the PDF files linked from my blog here:<br>
<br>
<a href="http://doctormo.wordpress.com/2009/09/09/systems-administration-network-infrastructure/" target="_blank">http://doctormo.wordpress.com/2009/09/09/systems-administration-network-infrastructure/</a><br>
<br>
Best of Luck, Martin Owens<br>
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