[UCLP] Please Review: Network Infrastructure

[Matthew Lye]

Feels a little light but a good explanation of how, if not the what it does,
and why it is that way.

Im assuming its an introductory course?

Language and formatting looks good. Nice use of text boxes to highlight code
snipits.

I would add using a dummy organizations details to show how to modify it for
specific situations to make things a little clearer. At the moment the
theory seems well covered, but more examples needed.

-Matthew Lye

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On Thu, Sep 10, 2009 at 7:28 AM, Martin Owens <doctormo at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hey all,
>
> For those not in the know about how this works, we have a seem of peer
> review we're trying to get the ball rolling on and this week's class
> that I've just very tentatively finished is about networking
> infrastructure such as DHCP and DNS and how to configure them.
>
>  1) If you know the subject then I need to you review the technical
> accuracy of the subject.
>  2) And if you don't, I need you to review the language, form and
> graphics.
>
> Each course should go through a certain amount of peer review and it's a
> job just as important as creation, editing, drawing and teaching.
>
> You can find the PDF files linked from my blog here:
>
>
> http://doctormo.wordpress.com/2009/09/09/systems-administration-network-infrastructure/
>
> Best of Luck, Martin Owens
>
>
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