<html> <head> <meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=EUC-KR"> </head> <body bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000"> Hello doc team, I've been reviewing some docs lately, and this paragraph here really bothered me. The subject has the file name. ORIGINAL: System-wide settings Settings for important parts of the system aren't stored in your Home folder. There are a number of locations that they could be stored, but most are stored in the /etc folder. In general, you won't need to back up these files on a home computer. If you are running a server, however, you should back up the files for the services that it is running. SUGGESTED (My own): System-wide settings Settings for important parts of the system are not stored in your Home folder. However, they are most commonly found in the /etc folder. On a home computer, you generally won't need to back up these files. On a server, however, you should back up the files for the major services that run in the system. Hopefully I didn't alter the original meaning of the settings, but it seems very hard to revise it. See the italics I've done for the original; that line bothered me the most. What is "that it is running?" Can someone else come up with a better paraphrase for the sentence, or even the paragraph? Thanks very much! <pre class="moz-signature" cols="72">-- John Kim Student / Pylang maintainer <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="http://www.launchpad.net/pylang">www.launchpad.net/pylang</a> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:johnkim.ubuntu@gmail.com">johnkim.ubuntu@gmail.com</a></pre> </body> </html>