Hey Gilbert,<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Jan 27, 2008 11:28 PM, Gilbert Mendoza <<a href="mailto:gmendoza@gmail.com">gmendoza@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">
Here's the latest patch for the server guide security section.  The patch<br>includes changes necessary for DocBook tag correctness with regard to<br>differentiating user input, computer output, program listing, and commands<br>
entered.  This is in response the the previous thread [1] regarding the matter.<br><br>[1] <a href="https://lists.ubuntu.com/archives/ubuntu-doc/2008-January/010226.html" target="_blank">https://lists.ubuntu.com/archives/ubuntu-doc/2008-January/010226.html</a><br>
<br>Comments welcome.<br><br></blockquote></div><br>
I think the patch looks great, I like how you mixed the
<userinput> with <computeroutput> for the password dialogs,
it does make the input a different shade.  My only question about the
new patch is wouldn't the following be <programlisting> since
they're the content of config files?<br>
<br>
  <screen><varname>DIR_MODE=0750</varname></screen><br>
  <screen><computeroutput>password   required   pam_unix.so
nullok obscure min=4 max=8 md5</computeroutput></screen><br>
  <screen><computeroutput>password   required   pam_unix.so
nullok obscure min=6 max=8 md5</computeroutput></screen><br clear="all">  <screen><computeroutput>AllowGroups sshlogin</computeroutput></screen><br>
  <screen><computeroutput>#exec /sbin/shutdown -r now
"Control-Alt-Delete pressed"</computeroutput></screen><br>
  <screen><computeroutput>password --md5 $1$s3YiK$M3lxAbqA6JLm2FbDWnClQ0</computeroutput></screen><br>
  <screen><computeroutput># lockalternative=true</computeroutput></screen><br>
<br>
I hope I'm not beating a dead horse with all this.  I really don't want
to be too picky, but the rest of the guide wraps config file segments
in <programlisting> tags.<br>
<br>-- <br>Party On,<br>Adam