Nice work Matthew, I like it a lot. The inital page needs to be simple and easy to navigate. +1 on both these points in this draft <div>On 2/23/06, Matthew East <<a href="mailto:mdke@ubuntu.com">mdke@ubuntu.com</a>> wrote:<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">On Thu, 2006-02-23 at 22:02 +1000, Naaman Campbell wrote: > I have just completed my latest attempt at overhauling the > UserDocumentation page - > <a href="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UserDocumentationDraft">https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UserDocumentationDraft</a> - and I am awaiting > public scrutiny/editing of the page prior to my proposed replacing of > the current UserDocumentation page. = General comment = I don't think a lot of headings with one item under each heading looks good at all. At the same time, I don't think that splitting categories into sections like "Web and Email Servers, Security, Miscellaneous" works well either: the user doesn't know what they are getting in the misc category. What I had envisaged would be a good way of breaking down this page was simply to use the existing categorisation to move things down one level, rather than the recategorisation. I've done a really quick version of what I think would work nicely, I haven't bothered to make links to subpages or anything but it is just to give you an idea. <a href="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/MatthewEast/Testing">https://wiki.ubuntu.com/MatthewEast/Testing</a> = Specific Comments = There is no obvious difference between a "Network" and an "Internet" device. Matt -- <a href="mailto:mdke@ubuntu.com">mdke@ubuntu.com</a> gnupg pub 1024D/0E6B06FF -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.1 (GNU/Linux) iD8DBQBD/av9tSaF0w5rBv8RArFGAJ4pl/U0b+vY33OsGJ7iMN8LXrRiZACdGM+6 yf/shRc5yY5I1Va0KQmmEI8= =RJR1 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- ubuntu-doc mailing list <a href="mailto:ubuntu-doc@lists.ubuntu.com">ubuntu-doc@lists.ubuntu.com</a> <a href="https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-doc">https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-doc </a> </blockquote></div> -- Grant Galbraith <a href="mailto:manicka@ubuntu.com">manicka@ubuntu.com</a>