The top right thing
Gunnar Hjalmarsson
ubuntu at gunnar.cc
Mon Apr 18 00:16:54 UTC 2011
On 2011-04-18 00:51, Jeremy Bicha wrote:
> On Apr 17, 2011 5:41 PM, "Gunnar Hjalmarsson" <ubuntu at gunnar.cc> wrote:
>> Is it necessary to name the thing? In the draft page I'm currently
>> working with I just wrote:
>> "the icon at the very right of the <em>top bar</em>"
>>
>> Think that's well as clear guidance as both "session indicator" and
>> "power icon".
>
> My initial thought was using both would be better. "Click the power
> icon at the very right of the top bar."
>
> But on reconsideration the power icon may be confused with the battery
> icon
Yeah, which Tom so conveniently demonstrated. :)
> so how about we go with your proposal: "Click the icon at the very
> right of the top bar. "
A grammar detail strikes me now: should it be "_to_ the very right"?
Anybody speaking fluent English who knows for sure?
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Gunnar Hjalmarsson
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