REVIEW request: 10.10 beta Release Notes Draft input request by 16:00 UTC

Phil Bull philbull at gmail.com
Thu Sep 2 11:11:06 UTC 2010


Hi Kate,

On Wed, 2010-09-01 at 23:41 -0500, Kate Stewart wrote: 
> A draft of the Release Notes can now be found at: 
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/MaverickMeerkat/BetaAnnouncement
> 
> Can you please proof read it, and fix any factual errors, style issues,
> grammar, typos, etc.  you spot.   It was derived from the beta announce
> used for Lucid - so verifying that there are no inadvertant references
> to the earlier release would be appreciated.  ;)

I've reviewed for spelling, grammar and style. No major changes were
needed. I added some extra detail in the "Ubuntu" section to reflect
recent changes to major applications too.

Thanks,

Phil

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