REVIEW request: 10.10 beta Release Notes Draft input request by 16:00 UTC
Phil Bull
philbull at gmail.com
Thu Sep 2 11:11:06 UTC 2010
Hi Kate,
On Wed, 2010-09-01 at 23:41 -0500, Kate Stewart wrote:
> A draft of the Release Notes can now be found at:
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/MaverickMeerkat/BetaAnnouncement
>
> Can you please proof read it, and fix any factual errors, style issues,
> grammar, typos, etc. you spot. It was derived from the beta announce
> used for Lucid - so verifying that there are no inadvertant references
> to the earlier release would be appreciated. ;)
I've reviewed for spelling, grammar and style. No major changes were
needed. I added some extra detail in the "Ubuntu" section to reflect
recent changes to major applications too.
Thanks,
Phil
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