Patch for internet/C/connecting.xml

[Dougie Richardson]

Hi Glen,

Thanks for the patch - it looks good. I'll check it out tonight and patch it.

2009/5/20 Glen Sawtell <glen.pctt at gmail.com>:
> Hi All,
>
> I am looking to contribute to the Ubuntu documentation so I dove into
> the deep end and have made a small patch where I noticed a couple of
> issues in the Jaunty branch. Please let me know if this is any good or
> not. There is still a problem with this page (<xref linkend="modem"/>)
> that goes nowhere but I did not know what it was linking to so I could
> not fix it. Looking forward to hearing from you.
>
> Regards,
> Glen.
>
>
> # Begin patch
> === modified file 'internet/C/connecting.xml'
> --- internet/C/connecting.xml   2009-03-23 22:46:11 +0000
> +++ internet/C/connecting.xml   2009-05-20 05:32:38 +0000
> @@ -14,13 +14,13 @@
>  <?yelp:chunk-depth 4?>
>  <chapter id="connecting" status="review">
>        <title>Connecting</title>
> -       <para>NetworkManager manages wired, wireless, mobile broadband, vpn
> and dsl connections. It does not
> +       <para>NetworkManager manages wired, wireless, mobile broadband, VPN
> and DSL connections. It does not
>        currently support dialup modem connections but there is help
> available in <xref linkend="modem"/>.</para>
>
>        <sect1 id="connecting-wired" status="review">
>                <title>Wired (LAN)</title>
> -               <para>DHCP connections (where settings are concfigured by your
> router) are automatically configured.
> -               Wired network connections are selected as default when connected.</para>
> +               <para>DHCP connections (where settings are given by your router)
> are automatically configured.
> +               Wired network connections are selected as the default connection
> when they are present.</para>
>                <sect2 id="connecting-wired-dhcp" status="review">
>                        <title>DHCP Connections</title>
>                        <para>Most routers use DHCP to allocate IP addresses.</para>
> @@ -31,15 +31,15 @@
>                        </orderedlist>
>                </sect2>
>                <sect2 id="connecting-wired-manual" status="review">
> -                       <title>Static Connections</title>
> -                       <para>If you don't use DHCP then you can configure a static
> connection.</para>
> +                       <title>Static IP Connections</title>
> +                       <para>If you don't use DHCP then you can configure a static IP
> connection.</para>
>                        <orderedlist>
>                                <listitem><para>Right click the NetworkManager icon in the system
> notification area.</para></listitem>
>                                <listitem><para>Click <guilabel>Edit
> Connections</guilabel>.</para></listitem>
>                                <listitem><para>Click the <guilabel>Wired</guilabel> tab.</para></listitem>
>                                <listitem><para>Select the connection and click
> <guibutton>Edit</guibutton>.</para></listitem>
>                                <listitem><para>Click the <guilabel>IPv4</guilabel> tab.</para></listitem>
> -                               <listitem><para>Choose <guilabel>Manual</guilabel> from the
> <guilabel>Method</guilabel> drop down.</para></listitem>
> +                               <listitem><para>Choose <guilabel>Manual</guilabel> from the
> <guilabel>Method</guilabel> drop down box.</para></listitem>
>                                <listitem><para>Enter your details and click
> <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.</para></listitem>
>                                <listitem><para>Click <guibutton>Close</guibutton>.</para></listitem>
>                        </orderedlist>
>
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Regards,

Dougie Richardson
http://www.lynxworks.eu/
dougierichardson at ubuntu.com