request for review of Ubuntu 9.04 beta release announcement

[Matt Zimmerman]

On Wed, Mar 25, 2009 at 06:59:30PM -0700, Steve Langasek wrote:
> Hi all,
> 
> Here is a draft for the Ubuntu 9.04 beta email announcement:
> 
>   https://wiki.ubuntu.com/JauntyJackalope/BetaAnnouncement
> 
> Please review and advise me of any problems.

I'd like to suggest that the upgrade instructions be moved earlier in the
document.  They're currently after the (longish) mirror list, and people may
not read that far ahead.

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 - mdz