Getting Started Guide - Looking for Feedback/QA

Ekaterina G. Potapova egeomar at mail.ru
Tue Feb 17 21:17:45 UTC 2009


I've found it rather quickly, sorry but I don't have time to find it for 
you now.
Avi Hein wrote:
> Where is this list? I am on the DocTeam Wiki and do not see it under 
> System Documentation or Wiki. I do see that under reviewing, that this 
> list is listed as the place to provide comments about Ubuntu 
> documentation. Is it hidden under a multitude of links?
> 
> On Tue, Feb 17, 2009 at 11:03 PM, Ekaterina G. Potapova <egeomar at mail.ru 
> <mailto:egeomar at mail.ru>> wrote:
> 
>      I
> 
>         look forward to contributing to Ubuntu.
> 
>     I'm very new at Ubuntu so I can hardly advice anything, but It seems
>     to me that there are many tasks for DocTeam and you can choose
>     something people do need at the moment and work on it. Sorry for
>     introducing such a commonplace idea.
>     Katya
> 
> 
>         On Feb 17, 2009 10:47pm, "Ekaterina G. Potapova"
>         <egeomar at mail.ru <mailto:egeomar at mail.ru>> wrote:
>          > I want to add several words to the discussion, if it's
>         possible. I'm quite new to Ubuntu as a whole and to DocTeam in
>         particular. But I have experience in tech writing for many
>         different companies, so I think I can judge a bit the quality of
>         the Ubuntu docs. And actually since I started contributing, I
>          appreciate  greatly the way the workflow is organized and the
>         way people work. So the idea that documentation is the weakest
>         point and that it needs some revolutionary changes seems to me
>         very doubtful or even absurd.
>          >
>          > Thanks,
>          >
>          > Katya
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > Avi Hein wrote:
>          >
>          >
>          >   >
>          >
>          > OSS Watch -
>         http://www.oss-watch.ac.uk/resources/documentation.xml
>          >
>          >
>          > Actually, this is an article about docu mentation in general
>         and discusses
>          >
>          > issues on management.
>          >
>          >
>          > Is Documentation Holding Open Source Back? -
>          >
>          > http://www.devx.com/opensource/Article/11839
>          >
>          >
>          > This is arguably an article discussing HCI principles rather
>         than managing
>          >
>          > or writing documentation. Its also almost entirely mute
>         because it neglects
>          >
>          > the fact that the predominant method for new users is to
>         Google rather than
>          >
>          > follow a document hierarchy. He also repeatedly states that
>         its an
>          >
>          > unscientific and unstructured approach to appraising
>         documentation.
>          >
>          >
>          > Linux.com wrote about the admirable FLOSS manual project
>          >
>          > (http://www.linux.com/feature/155205): "Documentation is one
>         area in which free/libre/open source software (FLOSS) is
>         weakest." That is what I meant, but we are working to improve this.
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > Don't even get me started on this.  I had dealings with this
>         project in the
>          >
>          > last run of the Desktop Training Team and their documentation
>         is not really
>          >
>          > any different to ours.  Its just the delivery method that is
>         better (at
>          >
>          > least until Moin supports PDF generation on the fly).
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > --> As I mentioned, my comments were not meant to refer to
>         Ubuntu's
>          >
>          > documentation but rather a general statement that appears to
>         be recognized
>          >
>          > today in the open source community. I hope to be able to help
>         contribute to
>          >
>          > it, as I am a strong believer in the Ubuntu philosophy and
>         the idea of a
>          >
>          > desktop-friendly distribution of Linux.
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > Much work has been done to improve these challenges, and so
>         instead of attacking a poor phrasing of words, let's collaborate
>         together, using professional standards, to improve the quality
>         of Ubuntu's documentation.
>          >
>          >
>          > Its not an attack, wording is the crux of what we do!
>          >
>          >
>          > I apologize if anyone was offended and eagerly would ask for
>         your feedback to improve the guide that I wrote (which will, in
>         parts, be added to the community supported documentation and if
>         anyone has suggestions for adding this to the official or
>         community supported documenation either bundled with Ubuntu or
>         on the website, I would be most grateful).
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > As Johnathon said, I'm not sure where this fits in and it is
>         very similar to
>          >
>          > large chunks of the system documentation and the switching
>         from windows
>          >
>          > guides.
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > I am worried that you listed this as your copyright - draft
>         or not, there
>          >
>          > are some very strong similarities to areas of our official
>         documentation.
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > --> I am releasing the final version of this specific doc
>         under the GNU Free
>          >
>          > Doc license. It's the same license as GIMP's release.
>         Obviously it wouldn't
>          >
>          > impede the official doc or anything anyone else has ever written.
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > That said, there are good points and the only real niggles
>         with what you've
>          >
>          > done are:
>          >
>          > 1. Kubuntu users are going to have a field day when they read
>         the line
>          >
>          > "Ubuntu uses the GNOME desktop environment" - I know what you
>         mean but I'd
>          >
>          > suggest mentioning from the out set the difference between
>         K/X/Ubuntu.
>          >
>          > 2. The book is very heavy on images, how do you plan to
>         manage this for
>          >
>          > translation?
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > --> Regarding point 1, I'm thinking about that but how do I
>         do that without
>          >
>          > creating a separate doc for Kubuntu? I haven't used Kubuntu
>         or the other
>          >
>          > versions, but would the procedures be different? I think it
>         can be easily
>          >
>          > modified for X/Kubuntu. I'm more than open to suggestions.
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > Regarding #2, you're right and on the basis of your
>         suggestion, I can (and
>          >
>          > should have initially had it this way) change the desktop
>         screenshot to
>          >
>          > numbering, which is the common way of doing this for
>         localization. I should
>          >
>          > have done that initially and so thank you for pointing this
>         out. Regarding
>          >
>          > the screenshots, I'm not sure how I can fix that except that
>         a localizer can
>          >
>          > redo them. In general, I was taught that it's good to use
>         images and
>          >
>          > screenshots but you raise a very good point.
>          >
>          >
>          >
>          > Thanks for suggestions and I will also be happy to make any
>         edits to the
>          >
>          > official or community documentation that I can be of
>         assistance on.
>          >
>          >
>          >
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